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My Blog

by DavidSilva'sLeftPeg (U1824)

Please will you guys read some of the stuff on my blog. You dont have to read it all, you can read whatever you want its just that I really could do with some feed-back as I want to be a sports journalist and I need experience of writing so I can get into University next year. So just have a skim and enjoy: feel free to offer constructive criticism as well!

Thanks!
WallyHammondsCoverDrive

http://shinysideoflife.wordpress.com/

posted on 18/12/11

I'll take a look. Good luck!

posted on 18/12/11

I would suggest that you write more articles in relation to current events in cricket rather than "best 11s" for a better experience on the journalistic side....

Having said that your writing style for those articles is good, everything flows point by point. The strauss article is abit wishy washy, as your talking about 2014 and exclude the possibility of new rising stars.......

Would like to see an article on england vs pak build up and aussies vs india... and so on..... effect of T20 on test?

posted on 18/12/11

thanks fellas!

afridi, thanks for the insight, i only did the XI posts to get things going and i was only going to post the occasional one every now and again for fun but thanks anyway. thoses are good ideas for articles, ill seriously give them a thought

im genuinely thankful boys, thanks for the help

(maybe i could do an article about future stars in cricket?) thoughts? (thnks!)

posted on 18/12/11

Get your basics right - so many spelling mistakes. First paragraph:

"Safly"
"Thir"

posted on 19/12/11

walyhammonds
want to write for www.sport pulse.net?
leave a comment here
http://www.ja606.co.uk/articles/viewArticle/63657

posted on 19/12/11

yeah sure mate
email me waqar_91@hotmail.com

posted on 19/12/11

Very good reading indeed...... from OZ

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