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Will England dominate rugby again?

http://richard-mills-sports.blogspot.com/2012/02/will-england-ever-dominate-world-of.html

If ya get the chance please give this a read and tell me what you think. Any feedback on here and also on the blog would be great as well as advice and criticisms. thanks.
role on saturday!!

posted on 3/2/12

Hi Richard,

Unfortunately blogs are strictly verboten by our IT stasi, could you put the contents on here?

The other thing I might suggest is to put something in on the other nations as a hook, on here there aren't too many readers - 1 or 2 Irish fans, 1 Welsh, 1 South African, 2 English and a few others who occasionally appear, though hopefully things might pick up a bit soon

posted on 3/2/12

Sorry Richard, I'm not sure what the point of your blog is? - you don't have any points and just seem to be summarising 12 articles that you footnote. You then say at the end you believe they can but don't give, really, any reasons why, simply paraphrasing other people's opinions.

I think you do summarise well and are easy to read but you need to put your own opinions in and back those opinions up with your reasons why and the footnotes that back it up.

Oh, I think Haskell isn't worthy of a mention - he was named as one of three harrassing a cleaner - the fact he is the only oen of three considering legal action against her would suggest to me that he just happened to be in the room and didn;t actually say anything

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