Blog/Article on Chelsea

Admin going to ban you for this outrage

Finally had time to read it and agree with the majority of views expressed regarding the forthcoming season.

I found the penultimate paragraph a bit of a struggle to get through. May be easier to digest if you broke it up into two paragraphs but good stuff overall.

I dont disagree with much of the content but gramatically it could be improved so it flows a bit better.

For example, there are a couple passages where you use the word 'and' twice in the same sentence. This should really be broke up into two seperate sentences.

Also, you use 'I' and 'I'm' in it a fair bit. Personal pronouns should be avoided in an article of this type. It sounds more authoritive.

If you absolutely must put yourself in the article, its better put something in the line of 'in this writers opinion.'

To add on, I hope this helps.

The article is good but needs some tightening.

Blueboy:

That's why I never was any good at English. But thanks for the feedback

Kharinesleggings

Thanks for the feedback mate

No worries always good to read viewpoints of fellow fans. Reason why we're all on this forum, well most of us anyway ha ha